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» posted on 11:18am - June 22 2007 | posted by babygothangel

inconsequential

tie me down and bring me low,
crashed to earth amid the pieces of my soul.
life has ever been forgotten now,
clouded by the circumstance,
and reality gone cold.
i creep through shards that slice my skin,
pieces of my brokenness,
laid here down by your feet,
so undesired.

alabaster countenance;
sun blasts, claims, defies ...
the scorched remains of yester-year,
in a moment, belied my fate.

you're so inconsequential,
my pretty rag doll,
and this moment rips your heart away,
drains your will and hopes at once.
naught remains save a burned-out shell,
scorched and saddened now,
vapours coming from the dust.

i have nothing left to give to you,
for there is nothing in my heart ...
broken, battered, just a hollow shell,
i lie forever and bleed,
inconsequential.

(c) b*g*a
6/21/06
9:14 am

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posted by: NeroAnima · date: 4:38pm - May 16 2009
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posted by: bloodunderrazor · date: 11:55am - June 25 2007
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The first two lines are the ones I liked the most. But it was all good.
We will never forget and never forgive and never ever fear. Fear is for the enemy. Fear and bullets.
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posted by: guest 4.224.222.226 · date: 9:39am - June 25 2007
I like!! In the third paragraph, would it be your take on death or mourning for her heart and soul?
leola


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